Binary Planet by Henry
Crawford is a book of poetry that is out of this world, extraordinary for its
reach forward (Future) and backwards (Past) but prophetically speaking to our
odd situation now with a pandemic virus and global protest over racial
injustice. The Dresser offers this example of Future:
Driving a 22nd Century Ambulance (excerpt)
into the tunnel comes a fleet
of self-driving flat-white
Escalades [patched] into [light
guided] screens updating the
incoming information [HUMAN
PRIMATES] reads the status
console [homing in] with
wide-area [nuclear resonance
imaging] showing a warren of
[modern humans] in the skeletal
stages of starvation
The Dresser notes that a higher intelligence speaks in this excerpt
and that creatures like you and me—human primates—are not faring well.
The Dresser offers this example of Past:
Driving Across a Bridge (excerpts)
…I cross
the Whitestone bridge into Queens
wondering [who I’d be] on the
Edmond Pettus Bridge
mine is a tribe of immigrant
factory hands [raised] across
the Rikers Island narrows
…
[measuring ourselves] by
the hats and coats of others
[fearing what we do not have]
Protected in the [normal] ways
…
…of hate
It’s always 1965 on the Edmund
Pettus Bridge [some locking arms]
some wielding [billy clubs] some are
[praying] others firing [tear gas]
others [walking] some on horses
some will [roll up the windows]
lock the doors [look straight ahead]
[stay in their lane] as the bridge
arcs over a river of lost history
bleeding out of Selma
The excerpt positions us in 1965 but the situation on the Pettus
Bridge sounds like what happened in front of the White House on June 1, 2020,
when police violently cleared a peaceful protest sparked by the brutal death of
a black man at police hands (or rather a knee) in Minneapolis.
DEFINING THE BINARY PLANET
Black or white, true or false, one or zero—Crawford defines
his binary planet. Yet he opens wide for what is outside these parameters. His
poem “Machine Language” is an overlay to the binary ASCII code of zeroes and
ones that is the last stanza of Sylvia Plath’s poem “Daddy.” Here is what the
poem looks like on the page.
Here is the last stanza of Plath’s “Daddy” in English:
There’s a stake in your fat black heart
And the villagers never liked you.
They are dancing and stamping on you.
They always knew it was you.
Daddy, daddy, you bastard, I’m through.
Here is Crawford’s poem separated from its binary code:
[we’re in here now]
[ where everything ]
[passes] [bottom of the machine]
[ our words ] [ finally ]
[ made just ]
[no Jews]
[no Germans] [ no vampires ]
[up there]
[ you unmasked ] [ the bastard ]
[here] [the skins of words]
[ in sequences ] [chalked
in whitespace ]
[ bastards all ]
[ and never ]
[ enough ]
[sun]
The Dresser will pause here to reflect on Crawford’s English
words which seem to both acknowledge and negate a huge prejudicial load with
words like passes (often used in the
context of a biracial person presenting as a Caucasian), Jews, Germans (in juxtaposition
with Jews, Germans are seen as oppressors of Jews in WWII when Hitler targeted
Jews for extermination), bastard (a
child born outside of marriage and therefore outside of protective inheritance
laws and societal acceptance of a certain period of time), skins, whitespace (these
words point to racial differences). Does machine language (the code of zeroes
and ones) cleanse the difference? Probably not, since there is “never enough
sun” to do it. This ambiguity flies in the face of binary—black/white and
true/false.
TAKING OFF THE EDGE: A LOVE POEM
Remarkably, Crawford offers another overlay poem where he does
not use machine language and he doesn’t use brackets. “The Love Poem of an
Average Man,” which ends the book and forms its own section, overlays his long
poem on fragments from Gertrude Stein’s book-length love poem Tender Buttons. Crawford then repeats Stein’s
fragments, such as “a large box is handily made,” “no window is useless,” “broken
in more places and mended,” “red rose and pink cut pink.” As he did in “Machine
Language,” Crawford’s poem appears in bold font and Stein’s poem appears in
gray characters. The Dresser’s collaborating analyst Hal Greenwald said, this [poem] is an exercise in boldness. If you take a look carefully at the
end of the poem, Crawford’s bold words start to fade. It’s an interesting
design touch that Henry Crawford said was his editor Nancy White’s idea. White
did the design layout and it is a handsome book. White gave Binary Planet more attention to page
layout than usual, because Crawford’s work has an artistic element that
requires seeing the poems on the page.
For a love poem, “The Love Poem of an Average Man” has a low
threshold of violence, starting with “pretend your beauty /as a gun pretends /its
aim /this is the tumble /this is the end of fortune /throwing off our gold /bailing
out /a drowning boat.” A little later in the poem, the violence becomes more
intense: “we /wield /the sharpest /knives /bleed out /the wounds /expose the
cuts /a river of blood.” What this poem puts forth is dirty realism and a
concluding possibility that “there is something in nothing /it is possible /to
be someone /it is possible /for us.”
WHATEVER YOUR MOOD OR SITUATION
Binary Planet
addresses the high arts: music—Bach in “Fugue Before Lunch,” art—“Walt Whitman
Ekphrastic”, writing—“Sketch of a Poem in 10 Broken Lines” as well as the low:
video games—“Game [ON],” television—“Twilight Zone Reboot,” boxing—“Taking the
Fall.” Whatever your mood or situation, Crawford has something for you—“Sex and
Its Discontents,” “Cowboy Dreaming,” “A Night at the Drive-In,” “Getaway Car,” “Elegy
for a Spin Instructor.”
The Dresser wants to leave you laughing though there is
plenty in “Happiness” to remind you that in our time of the invisible killing
virus, communicating this emotion might be dangerous for your health.
Happiness [excerpt]
Happiness must be possible [else why would we pursue it]
but wait a minute [it might be something like] “world peace”
which we think will happen someday [but it’s hard to imagine]
so what would happiness look like [does it come in colors]
white? black? blue? green? …sizes?...
…[will they let you take your happiness back if
it doesn’t] fit [how long does it last?]…
…and
what if your happiness lasts longer
than four hours [do you need to contact a medical doctor]
…
The Dresser acknowledges that Binary Planet by Henry Crawford is a book published by The Word
Works. Thanks to Hal Greenwald for long and enjoyable readings and discussions
of Binary Planet.
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