Starfall
in the Temple from
Blue Light Press by Prartho Sereno is a masterful poetry collection offering
both gravitas and levity. The Dresser sees this as a work of a generous teacher
and wise elder. It could be the poetry that saves your life or sanity. It could
be the poetry that makes you happy for being in this chaotic world.
TABLE OF CORRESPONDENCES
The
underwater tug we call ebb tide
the
seaweed knows as longing
The lilac
we’ve deemed common
is known
to the bee as Rapture of the Deep
These
clouds we’ve named cumulus
the sky
praises as bread
The ones
we’ve come to know as raven
appear to
the moon as flickers of grief
What we
call wind in the tule grass
is known
to the earth as the happiness
too
delicate to name
“Table of
Correspondences,” the prologue poem, sets the tone for our human needs and
feelings in counterbalance with what happens in nature and the cosmos. Things
aren’t always as they present. Rapture of the
Deep, which can happen to divers breathing in gases under elevated
pressure and may alter their judgment, offers a metaphoric warning that what
(e.g., stimulants like drugs, alcohol, the beauty of nature) may make us happy may also have other
consequences.
Starfall is a collection set with 75 pages
of poetry divided into three unnamed sections. Section I introduces the reader
to the narrator, her spirituality (Buddhism), and the cosmos as interpreted by
scientists of our time (e.g., Albert Einstein and Stephen Hawkings) and others,
such as her grandson and classic film star Charlie Chaplin. The poem “Negative
Capability” occurs in this section instilling the notion that artists can find
beauty and deal with imperfection in the face of challenging situations. In
this excerpt, Sereno discloses how one painter was coping with the devastating
Paradise fire:
NEGATIVE CAPABILITY [excerpt]
It’s fire
season in California and I’m on the downtown.
library
lawn thinking about 80-mile-an-hour winds.
I’m
thinking about the traffic jam out of Paradise
and the
artist who lost everything, but learned,
she said,
to paint with her eyes.
Could we
call this ability to paint with the eyes a Rapture of the Deep? Perhaps.
Section II
emphasizes the call to movement. It begins with reference to the Sanskrit
mantra Charaiveti which means keep going. Chanting this mantra is
reportedly how Gautama Buddha ended his sermons. The reference to this mantra
appears in “Seafarers,” the first poem of Section II. The Dresser is immensely
impressed by the artfulness of this poem.
SEAFARERS
We come to
love the heron
for his
artful tucking-in of tribulations,
the
morning cloud for her coolheaded
midwifery
of the sun.
We are
grateful for the way the sea
goes gray
in tune with the sky.
Nothing
more asked of us
neither
from above nor below.
For the
way the ship moves
like a
sage through the narrows,
its
engines grinding: Charaiveti, charaiveti…
Keep
going, its only song.
We see it
briefly now—we never were
the
passenger. Nor are we the ship.
Only this
flux and flow, a conjuring
the
oscillation of sunlight on sea.
As a poem
set on the sea, it embodies Rapture of the Deep. Also, the heron of this poem
whose “artful tucking-in of tribulations” is a stand-in for the artist
experiencing Negative Capability.
Section
III features what is or was after movement stops—Bardo (the in between state of existence—death versus rebirth) as
well as grief and personal reckoning. The last poem of the collection “The
Temple Master Takes His Leave,” puts the narrator in touch with her late
spiritual master through a series of koan like stanzas. The last image is of
her dropping pebbles into a bottomless well.
THE TEMPLE MASTER TAKES HIS LEAVE [an excerpt]
now
all
my
questions
will
be
pebbles
dropped
into
a
bottomless
well:
not
one
plunk
Need the
Dresser say this is another instance of Rapture of the Deep and this time it’s bound
with a comic touch by ending with the onomatopoeic word plunk.
Prartho Sereno
provides so much to love in this volume. She is good at painting pictures as
well as singing into the ear:
THE MYSTERY SCHOOL OF RHYME [excerpt]
Tell me it
ain’t monumental; tell me it’s just accidental:
rapture, capture
womb and tomb
ease and trees,
trees and breeze
try, cry,
lie, die…
all the notes on the road to why.
If the Rapture
of the Deep of Starfall in the Temple alters one’s perception of the
world but also gets that person through to another state of existence and a
different way to cope, let’s surrender and fall into this deep current that
bodes well being.